A Star Has Fallen

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A Star Has Fallen
on: December 14, 2012, 10:18:00 AM

Hey guys, just finished another piece of rap lyrics titled "A Star Has Fallen"

The style I used on this one is not my usual style since the chorus is not rapped, the intro chorus was sang on a acoustic way, then the second and the last chorus is on more of a scream. All I really need to do now, is buy a fucking mic then record this shit. Anyway, this one have no beat yet, if someone can point me a good beat maker that is free then I'll be really thankful. Oh well, it might be a little bit weird and out of tune if you're just reading it but meh, wait till I can record it.  :P

Chorus:

When a star has fallen from the sky
That day I wish that I could fly
I drew a gun and look up high


I just feel that I just fuck my life.
And the things that we had done
On our life will forever be part of our life

Verse 1:

All the things, everything that I did was
My choice, my decision that I think was
Not funny, not corny cause all I did was
To decide, no biggie cause I think was
Everything will be easy like I dream it was
But for once, I got a feeling that I just bust
What I can I do? its choice that I can't take back
Pull the trigger with a finger then live our life
Face everything with a faith
All the game that he throw that we call fate
Gotta say its tough but I'm okay
Need to face it, on this phrases then flow with the pace


Chorus:

When a star has fallen from the sky
That day I wish that I could fly
I drew a gun and look up high


I just feel that I just fuck my life.
And the things that we had done
On our life will forever be part of our life (x2)

Verse 2:

From my heart, its a start, of a brand new life
I won't fail, I even dare that you fuck my life
But i'll tell you I don't care cuz i'll live my life
To the fullest, to the best that I can live up
Its a test that I set so I'll do my best
I'm a fool but i have goal so i can't be fool
Its a promise, its decided so I can't give up
So to the rest, do your best and don't fuck up
Grab your dream, you'll be redeem and may become free

Chorus:

When a star has fallen from the sky
That day I wish that I could fly
I drew a gun and look up high


I just feel that I just fuck my life.
And the things that we had done
On our life will forever be part of our life (x2)

Performance time on practice with the planned timing is total of 2:53.
« Last Edit: April 15, 2013, 04:10:18 AM by sonofjay »

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by: SonofJay

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Re: A Star Was Fallen
Reply #1 on: December 20, 2012, 06:27:27 PM

I'll wait for your recording. You can use the media section to upload your music too.

BTW, Do you have a group??


Re: A Star Was Fallen
Reply #2 on: December 20, 2012, 10:46:59 PM

Quick error - A Star Was Fallen should be A Star Has Fallen.



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Re: A Star Was Fallen
Reply #3 on: December 20, 2012, 11:35:58 PM

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I'll wait for your recording. You can use the media section to upload your music too.

BTW, Do you have a group??

Nope, working solo. Though got some friends who supports me.

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Quick error - A Star Was Fallen should be A Star Has Fallen.

Lol, thanks for pointing that, though grammar error isn't really that important to music, but the one you pointed out is damn obvious. D:

Chronicles of Darkness
by: SonofJay

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They can hate, let them hate, make them hate.


A Star Was Fallen
Reply #4 on: April 15, 2013, 03:47:51 AM

GO and GET this so we hear this thing you have written.
http://musescore.org/en


A Star Has Fallen
Reply #5 on: April 15, 2013, 04:11:42 AM

Okay I'm downloading it. Will probably try it tonight or tomorrow.

Chronicles of Darkness
by: SonofJay

A BlizzMod Hosted Project

They can hate, let them hate, make them hate.


A Star Has Fallen
Reply #6 on: April 15, 2013, 06:42:56 AM

GO and GET this so we hear this thing you have written.
http://musescore.org/en
Hey, quite elegant this software :D

Okay I'm downloading it. Will probably try it tonight or tomorrow.
Yes!!! I'd like to hear your songs live!!!


A Star Has Fallen
Reply #7 on: April 22, 2013, 06:55:39 AM

Hey, quite elegant this software :D
I've been using that software for nearly half a year, now.


 

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